sample proposals

Textbooks-1
Strengths- 1. Flows really well
2. Had good knowledge of the audience, and used their language and organization accordingly.
Weaknesses-1. Could have shortened the first solution some, it got tedious to read.
2. Didn't establish that they knew what they were talking about at all.

Nuclear Power-2
Strengths- 1. Well-written
2. good data to back up the claim
Weaknesses- 1. Not organized nicely
2. Need to clearly state solution and refute other claims

Meal Plan-3
Strengths- 1. Thorough justification
2. straightforward organization
Weaknesses- 1. Weird reasoning behind wanting to solve the issue
2. Need more evidence to back up the claims